Kia ora
This week we had to do some writing with three different senses of a place.
The Non Healthy Hospitable.
The smell of the old ragged place was like dead rats with a sickening smell of the beds was like dead people. Sights of all of the walls broken, smashed, rotten crackles in the wood floor. The walls collapse and fall.
By Toby Schollum.
Hi Toby,
ReplyDeleteYou have used some great descriptive language to describe this picture, it certainly gives an eerie feeling about the place doesn't it?
Have a great week,
Mrs H
Kia ora Toby,
ReplyDeleteWhat happened at this hospital?! It certainly isn't a healthy place anymore, is it? I don't think I'd like to go there!
Miss M