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Tuesday, 5 December 2017

Recount writing test results

My teachers have worked out my average score for writing and I am at 3B.
This is below the National Standard for my year level.
I am doing great at my ideas and my vocabulary also my sentence structure
I need to work harder on spelling and punctuation for next year's writing test.
This is a screenshot of my results in our end of Term 4 recount writing test.

Tuesday, 21 November 2017

P.A.T maths test


Here is a snapshot of my Term 4 results for the PAT maths test. I scored 24 points out of 37. I am pleased with my result.

P.A.T test

                                                                       Kia ora
Yesterday we did the results for the P.A.T reading test I got so many more points than I got in term 1.
I got 25 points in the test.

                       

Thursday, 21 September 2017

Raw Meat Poem

Kia Ora
This week we focusing on raw meat poem writing. We were observing Mrs b B cooking the raw meat.
This is my work.


Thursday, 14 September 2017

Skittles

Kia ora

This week we have been focusing on 5 senses. Here is some of my writing about my Skittles science experiment 

Wednesday, 30 August 2017

The Non Healthy Hospitable.

Kia ora
This week we had to do some writing with three different senses of a place.

The Non Healthy Hospitable.

The smell of the old ragged place was like dead rats with a sickening smell of the beds was like dead people. Sights of all of the walls broken, smashed, rotten crackles in the wood floor. The walls collapse and fall.

By Toby Schollum.

Tuesday, 15 August 2017

The Science Fair!!!

Kia ora!!
This term we all had to make a group of four, and then we had to think of a science project that had to do with Up Up and away. In my group were Cyrus, Max, Jayden and me of course. There were sooo many ideas to think of, we did the coke rocket, some people were doing lightning in a bottle for their experiment, now that's crazy!!!! Others were doing a bottle car, coke and mentos explosion, and so much more. I will catch up with you soon so I can tell you the results. Good bye!!!!

Wednesday, 26 July 2017

Learning how to read a scientific report.

Kia ora
We are learning how to read and write scientific reports. We have been doing experiments and writing about them. This is a reading activity we did. We had to be able to match a title for a report with a wondering question.
We are learning how to understand the structure and language of a report about a scientific experiment.

In this exercise you need to match a title with its question. Use the ‘Fill tool’ to colour code the matching ideas.
Notice that none of these questions begin with a ‘Why….’.  This is because the purpose of a scientific experiment report is to share what you thought you knew, what you thought would happen and your observations about what actually did happen. It’s a bit like you are saying:
I’m wondering this…..because I know this…...so therefore if I do this I think this might happen.
So, at the end of a successful scientific report, you may not be able to say why something happened but you will be on the way to finding out why.
Then, when you do find out why, you will have to learn how to write an Explanation. The purpose of  Explanation writing is to answer Why questions. So, do not be surprised if your teachers decide to teach you Explanation writing later on!!!

Freezing Water.
What will happen when you mix vinegar and baking soda?
Floating and Sinking.
What will happen to an ice cube if you take it out of the freezer?
Kitchen Chemistry.
Which materials make the best insulators?
Disappearing Water.
What happens when you put a container of water into a freezer?
Keep Your Cool.
What will happen to a puddle of water on a hot day?
Ice Cube Experiment.
Does Blutack float?

Friday, 30 June 2017

The Zoofari trip!!!

Kia ora.
This week we went to Auckland zoo on a Zoofari
We slept in the old elephant house, it was so big!!
Our dinner was so so so nice, we had sausage sizzle, potato and green salad, it was just too, good!!!
We got to see all types of animals, cheetahs, monkeys, elephants, it was awesome seeing all of these animals.

Sadly they did not have the animal that I am working on for my animal report, And my animal was a panther.
But they did not have a panther but it was still fun.

Ka Kite ano.



 


Monday, 19 June 2017

writing with Mrs White law.

At the start of term 2, Mrs White law made us do 20 min writing every day. We had to write any thing that came to our minds. This is all the story's that i have done.



16.5.17. Our school cat Tigger. Tiger is 18 and he has lovey fer. He also likes sleeping and sometimes likes to eat. I love the colors that he has. He like a mini tiger. He does come outside and I love it because then I can pat him. I think that Tigger is a really awesome cat. 59.

17.5.17. My cat Chubby. I have a gray and white with very sharp teeth and its name is
Cubby and she is 7 years old. It has soft fur and very sharp clores. It sometimes jumps up big things like rocks and beds also me sometimes. I play with my cat all time, We go outside and I run and she tries to catch me .It is very funny when she goes play with me.
Sometimes when I am reading she comes to me because she wants food. 90.

18.5.17. My dog Lizey. I have a dog called Lizey and she is 11 years old. she is a Lazsiey bred. she likes to jump and run with me and I love it. She as the soffits fer and has the amazing eyes. She like to play tag and soccer with me and i love it. Lizey is a great farm dog for chasing cows and rabbits also sheep. She has clores that are needles. Lizey has teeth like sharp parper. 80

19.5.17. My dog Girl. I have a 7 year old dog and her name is Girl. She has very sharp teeth and clores. She is very fast, faster than me and I am fast. Girl is very scared of sticks and the color red. I like to play with her when I am bored or when I am angry because she curmes me down. Sometimes when me and my mum take Girl for walks she does not runs off or be silly she is curme all the time. I really like Girl because she is well behaved and likes to play with me. 105

21.5.17. So many friends. On the weekend we had so many friends over, it was like a city in my house. We mostly played outside because it was very sunny, but when it was not sunny we played board games inside. When we were outside we jumped on the tramp, or we would play tag, and maybe play hide and seek. When we were inside we would play board games like Trouble or Master mind, even Risk. Sometimes I like to play outside games not inside because I like to have more fresh air outside, and inside I  have played all the board games so the board games are very boring. 110

22.5.17. My mice. I had 2 mice and their names are Squeggles and Sktills. Squeggles  had a long tale but a rat took a chip out of the tale. Sktills has a really lovely fer but it was really sad because it is very scared of us and other things but she loves Squeggles because she is her friend. Sktills had clores that were needles and teeth like mini sores. Squeggles on the other hand has teeth that were cut paper and her clores were mini needles as well. I played with them all the time inside, I would sit down and I would put the mice on me, or I would put them on the penbag. 114

24.5.17. Ohaeawai School. I am 10 years old. I have never gone to school but this year I have decided to go to school, Ohaeawai school. I like this school, well sometimes at least. I have a lot of friends now that I am at Ohaeawai school so there are a lot more things. Now that I am at school I know my words and were to put a fullstop or anything really. Before I went to school I was at home school, It was very very fun because I am at home and being at home well you are learning is fun, also because you always with your mum or dad for the learning is also very fun as well. I do like this school, I really do like this school. 133.



25.5.17.                                      My Finches.
I had two finches and their names were Sparkles and Percy. They were so quiet and had very sharp pecks, and also very beautiful eyes. They always were flying around their cage going from side to side. They loved their seeds, they also loved flying, they also loved sleeping. Sometimes I would go to their cage and talk to them, while whistling to them at least. Sadly one of them died on the 27th of March 2015, I was very sad but Sparkles was my sister not mine, I was still very sad. Now to this day Percy is still alive, but she is sad because she is alone because none of my family looks much at her. but my mum and I do. So she is sometime happy. I really do love my Finch. 141.


26.5.17.                                               The Tale of Hope.
Once upon a time their was two men and their names were Max and Toby. These two men were hunters who did not have much money or things to survive with. They only had to hope for last lives they had. Max and Toby lived in a forest, well not a really human forest an enchanted forest where there was very giant trees also giant house, and those house where for the rich so all of the people down in the long grass were very poor indeed most of them had no home or some of them did not even have neny food. We were very likely to have a tent and even food. “Hooo” I said getting up from my bed, trying not to wake Max up. As soon as I went out of the tent door Max woke up. “What are you doing?” Said Max. “stay here” I said. Max looked like a sleepy sloth. “Fine” Replied Max. To be continued. 174

30.5.17.                                          A tale of hope, part 2.

I was about to go outside when max said.”where are you going.” I stoped moving, “somewhere” I said. Then I left the tent. I was going to find a way up to the rich, I did not want to tell Max about this because would want to come with me or he would try and stop me so I did not want to come. I was looking for about 2 hours and then I found a way up, it was going to be hard.94

My multiplication progress.

Kia ora
Here is my multiplication progress for this year. In Term 1 I still had to learn my 5x tables so I was on Level 2 Stage 5.

In Term 2 I knew my 5x so now I have moved up to Level 3 Stage 6. I feel good but I need to keep learning because I still don’t know my 7x,8x,9x,11x and 12x tables, That must be very hard.



My basic facts progress.

Kia ora
Here is my basic facts progress for this year. In Term 1 I was working on Stage 5 and I got a score of 24/60. In Term 2, my basic facts score for Stage 5 was 33/60 so my teachers said I was not ready for Stage 6. So, I did not get tested on Stage 6 test. And I bet that there is some hard stuff on Stage 6 but I’m lucky because we have some expert kids in Team Moana who can help us.

getting ready for BACK YOUR BUTT UP!!!!!!

Kai ora. For the first 2 weeks we have been working on fun lunch Time-Fun Friday. Now our one is Back your butt up and me and Magic, Dulcie ,Cassdiy, and Amethyst made the game. Now fun lunch is a day where the seniors organising fun games for our little Tumariki, like mission impossible, Squat the cups, and much much more.